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There are notes attached to paper for each correction that need to be made or changed. PLEASE HIGHLIGHT ALL CORRECTIONS MADE SO I CAN EASILY SPOT WHAT WAS DONE.
Page 1: Title Page: please create title page like example file that is attacted
page 2: Please create abstract page like example that is attached
Page 3: Please creat table of contents page like example that is attached. Delete the
appendixes and please make sure that all chapters align to the correct page number.
Get rid of the 1.0, 2.0, ect. Chapter 5 should be the last chapter. What I have for . What Ihave for 6.0 needs to be in chapter 5. There should not be a 6, 7, or 8.
Page 6: the quote “subject matters such as instructional leadership, interpersonal skills admonition, problem-solving, as well as behavior modification-something that appears to lack a “concentrate on intellectuals,” must have been victimized by plenty of vital misapprehensions”, please add a page number to this quote
Page 7: Where it says “out of fact” in the first paragraph, please add detail of what this emeans
Page 10: the description for the level system: Please add a more detailed description of what it is for the readers
Page 15: “Närhi, Kiiski et al. (2017), please put this in apa format
Page 15: ” Students must pay for backup reinforcers with points earned from the level system and should not have access to any of the backup reinforcers through any other means. Sometimes teachers allow students access to backup reinforcers through other means, and this eliminates the students’ motivation to work for the backup reinforcers through the points and level system. (Cancio & Johnson, 2007 p. 518).” Please
add a small description after this block quote.
Page 20: after patterson and his colleagues. Please add the year and put in apa formatting
Page 22: add year after patterson and fix sentence to make sure it makes sense, it’s missing a word.
Page 26: please move section that is highlighted to chapter 2 in a spot that makes sense and is not out of place:
Page 27: Jones, Dohrn, and Dunn (2004), please format this into apa formatting
Page 30: Are these improvements suggestions of yours or from your sources? If they are from your sources, that needs to be stated. Please state that they are from sources
Please add somehing about differentiation in chapter 2: This is the first time I recall reading about differentiation in your thesis. To write about it in your recommendations, I suggest that you include it somewhere in the Chapter 2 literature review. Who says it’s necessary? Where has/hasn’t it worked?

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